Race Comment Explainer

Original comment with matches highlighted:

mid-division, nto 4th be 9th, pushed along into 4th before 3 out, soon ridden and

Matched phrases & meanings

Phrase	Meaning
Pushed along	The jockey started to urge the horse (hand-riding, not necessarily using the whip).
Mid-division	Running in the middle of the pack.
not fluent	The horse jumped the tenth fence/hurdle poorly or awkwardly
Faded	The horse lost speed and dropped back through the field.

Summary

The jockey started to urge the horse (hand-riding, not necessarily using the whip).
Running in the middle of the pack.
The horse jumped the tenth fence/hurdle poorly or awkwardly
The horse lost speed and dropped back through the field.